Writing Resources from Fifteen Minutes of Fiction
The following is a piece of writing submitted by amazing on May 18, 2009
"I think it is much better with the music, but feedback is always good, so imagine that there is music."
Faerie Tale
There’s a girl down the roadAnd she lives in a golden castle
And I live in the house behind her gardens
And they look like a painting,
No flower loses petals in the wind,
And there’s never any wind to fly away on
There’s no magic in the trees
And they’re pruned to perfection
But they’re lifeless and mundane and they’re golden
And the girl in the castle
She is sad and she is lonely
And she’s spent all her life by her window
And she stares at her still trees
And she wishes they’d start dancing
But they’re golden, they were only made for standing
And she cries all the night
And at two in the morning
She will always fall asleep by her window
And tomorrow she will wake up
And she’ll leave her golden castle
And she’ll move to a cottage by the ocean
Where all the trees are real
And the wind comes everyday
And she can leave her walls and find so much magic
And without her tears to feed on,
The castle will turn to stone,
And the garden will die and be forgotten
But the girl by the ocean,
She will always remember
That gold is the most lethal poison
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