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The following is a piece of writing submitted by Honore on October 19, 2007
Shopping Mall
Yesterday I went to the mall after school because my friends were going. We went to the store with all the dumb joke gifts while we were there, a man came in with a gun. The store guy and my friends were all scared, but not me. I walked up to him and said "is that a real gun?"He was surprised, and he pointed the gun at me and told me to shut up. I said "I don't think its a real gun."
He said shut up or I'll shoot you.
I said "I'm not scared of waterguns."
Then my friends stopped being scared and said "Its just a watergun." Then they started laughing at him.
He got mad and pointed the gun at one of my friends. He kept laughing so he pulled the trigger.
It wasnt a water gun.
The End.
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